I interviewed Keith about his thoughts on being a student here at Belmont University. He said he chose to attend Belmont for three reasons. First, his mom graduated from Belmont. Second, he likes being close to home (30-45 min. away) because he sings in a quartet on the weekends. Third, Belmont has a great music program which is what he is studying. I asked him if the students and professors were friendly, and he said that they were. He said the professors are very helpful. One thing he said he didn't like about Belmont is that the advising is too ambiguous and sometimes confusing. He likes convos and thinks they are a good idea to experience different learnings. Keith also likes the fact that students can pick and choose which ones they want to attend. Overall, Keith had many positive things to say about Belmont and has enjoyed being a student here so far.
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I interviewed Keith about his thoughts on being a student here at Belmont University. He said he chose to attend Belmont for three reasons. First, his mom graduated from Belmont. Second, he likes being close to home (30-45 min. away) because he sings in a quartet on the weekends. Third, Belmont has a great music program which is what he is studying. Keith said that the students are friendly and the professors are very helpful . His only complaint is that advising can sometimes be confusing because of ambiguity. He likes convos and thinks they are a good idea to experience different learnings. Keith also likes the fact that students can pick and choose which ones they want to attend. Overall, Keith had many positive things to say about Belmont and has enjoyed being a student here so far.
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